Cover Letter Feedback

This is an email review of your Cover Letter for a job application, leveraging my knowledge as a hiring manager across thousands of hires, and what's happening with AI and Applicant Tracking Systems. 
 
I will provide you with a suggested redraft, based on optimisation for the role you are applying for and a future template structure for future applications.  
 
Once you have paid for the product, please email your drafted letter to geoffmartin@thinkbigcareers.com with the name you have used for your purchase order. By also forwarding me an electronic copy of the job advertisement or even the role description, this will help my review further, which I will have back to you within 24 hours via a scanned email with some attached notes.